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中考英語(yǔ)作文范文及評(píng)析:記敘文
【習(xí)作要求】
根據(jù)中文意思和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給的英文提示詞語(yǔ)必須都用上，句數(shù)不限；中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐句翻譯。
一個(gè)雨天，李莉乘出租車回家。在車?yán)锼l(fā)現(xiàn)司機(jī)在學(xué)英語(yǔ)。他對(duì)李莉說(shuō)了些什么? 此事對(duì)你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)有何啟發(fā)? 為支持北京奧運(yùn)你打算做些什么?
(1) one rainy day, go home, by taxi
(2) in the car, find, was learning English
(3) said to Li Li, I, weak, English, when at school, now work hard, to help with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games
(4) I think... to show support （n.支持）for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games
【中考英語(yǔ)作文范文】
One rainy day, Li Li went home by taxi. In the car she found (that) the driver was learning English. He said to Li Li: "I was weak in English when I was at school. Now I'm working hard at it to help with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games." I think I should learn from the driver. English is very important to us because it is widely used all over the world. As a student, I'll do my best to learn English well at school. And I'm going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.
一個(gè)下雨天，李立乘出租車回家。她在車上發(fā)現(xiàn)司機(jī)在學(xué)英語(yǔ)。他對(duì)李立說(shuō)：“我在上學(xué)的時(shí)候英語(yǔ)很差。我現(xiàn)在在努力工作幫助北京2008奧運(yùn)會(huì)�！拔蚁胛覒�(yīng)該從駕駛中學(xué)習(xí)。英語(yǔ)對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)是非常重要的因?yàn)樗谌澜鐝V泛使用。作為一個(gè)學(xué)生，我會(huì)盡我最大的努力學(xué)好英語(yǔ)學(xué)校。我要盡可能多地展示2008北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的支持，說(shuō)英語(yǔ)。
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
第一句很重要，以便確定全文時(shí)態(tài)。句與句之間要連貫。關(guān)鍵句要用上，如：I'm going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.
(1) 格式：簡(jiǎn)介
(2) 人稱：第三人稱
(3) 時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)，一般將來(lái)時(shí)
(4) 短語(yǔ)、句式、句型：短語(yǔ)與句式已給出，句型包括簡(jiǎn)單句、直接引語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)從句
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